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Old 10.06.2004, 18:21   #12 (permalink)
Fabster
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Default Re: Offering free custom template…

I really like the top part and the right side. the left side is too "packed". I would take away the grapes a the efect from the grapes to the bottom. "keep it simple" I would also bring only one bottle and one glas.

How would You maintain the mainbody part with the grapes picture in the background. I can be hard to add something there without getting into trouble with reading any text..

Overall I would make it a little bit "lighter" and more decent. Wine is usually something filigree for Your palate (hope this is the rigth english word). I think a website should transport this to the user.

I hope I could make myself clear, if not...
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